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Friday 27 February 2015

The Big Waves

` I was walking on the sand, looking at the big waves in the ocean. I saw people in the water getting knocked over. I stared at the people surfing over the waves. I looked at the big waves splashing and crashing together. I stopped at the sand and someone wrote surfing with a pointy stick. I started to walk into the ocean and it was freezing. My legs and arms had goosebumps and I was shivering. When I got use to the water I finally went in fully. I stayed in the water till we were going to leave.

1 comment:

  1. Very good writing Alexis. You have added detail where necessary. Your description of getting into the cold water reminds me of my swims.

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