I am a Year 6 student at Owairaka District School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 20 and my teacher is Mr Waller.
Friday, 27 February 2015
The Big Waves
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I was walking on the sand, looking at the big waves in the ocean.
I saw people in the water getting knocked over.
I stared at the people surfing over the waves.
I looked at the big waves splashing and crashing together. I stopped at the sand and someone wrote surfing with a pointy stick. I started to walk into the ocean and it was freezing. My legs and arms had goosebumps and I was shivering. When I got use to the water I finally went in fully. I stayed in the water till we were going to leave.
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Very good writing Alexis. You have added detail where necessary. Your description of getting into the cold water reminds me of my swims.
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